Update language on initial setup screen

Bug Description

The language on the initial Site Kit setup screen reads:

“Get insights about how people find and use your site, how to improve and monetize your content, directly in your WordPress dashboard”

This isn’t a complete sentence. Can we change it to something like:

“Get insights on how people find your site, as well as how to improve and monetize your site’s content, directly in your WordPress dashboard.”

Steps to reproduce

1. Install and activate Site Kit
2. Go to Site Kit > Dashboard to start the setup process

Screenshots

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Acceptance criteria

• The copy on the initial Site Kit setup screen (see screenshot above) should be slightly adjusted to: Get insights on how people find your site, how to improve and monetize your site’s content, and how to improve page speed directly in your WordPress dashboard

Implementation Brief

Using the SetupUsingProxy component update the description:

“Get insights about how people find and use your site, how to improve and monetize your content, directly in your WordPress dashboard”

to:

“Get insights on how people find your site, as well as how to improve and monetize your site’s content, directly in your WordPress dashboard.”

Test Coverage

• N/A

Visual Regression Changes

• Check VRT tests and update if necessary

QA Brief

• Reset Site Kit
• Go to the Site Kit dashboard and check that the setup screen text has been updated as per the IB

Changelog entry

• Update language on initial setup screen

[marrrmarrr]

Sounds good!

[bethanylang]

@marrrmarrr That makes sense to me, though I don’t think we need that last comma:

Get insights on how people find your site, how to improve and monetize your site’s content, and how to improve page speed directly in your WordPress dashboard